This week me and Hardeep put together our first draft. We put in all of the parts where the artist was performing and when we watched it over we didn’t like what it looked like so decided to change our mind and go back to my idea that I had when I done my pitch and have a different artist to the actual girl playing the part. This was agreed with the girl that we asked and this will be filmed on the green screen next week.
Also this week we went around our class and looked at everyone’s work and gave them feedback. We received feedback ourself as shown on the previous post, where we got told what improvements we should make and what people think we should definitely keep as they really liked what we done which was good. We were happy to see that people enjoyed it and agreed with the things we had done. It was good to see that they noticed the storyline so all there is to do now is perfect it and make the changes and add the new performance.
Some changes that people thought we should make was having some parts of the video black and white as it will make it more visually appealing. This is something we will take on board as we agree with this too. They also said that there should be a contrast between the way the boy treated the old girl and how he treats the new girl to show that he has actually made the wrong decision. We are thinking about this as we think it's a good point but we are thinking of a good way to do this. People said they especially liked our montage as they thought it had a lot of meaning in such as short space of time and thought it was visually entertaining and different.
Because of the changes that we are making we will also be doing another photo shoot as we the artist has now changed and will need to have her on the ancillary products, magazine advert and digipak.
Some changes that people thought we should make was having some parts of the video black and white as it will make it more visually appealing. This is something we will take on board as we agree with this too. They also said that there should be a contrast between the way the boy treated the old girl and how he treats the new girl to show that he has actually made the wrong decision. We are thinking about this as we think it's a good point but we are thinking of a good way to do this. People said they especially liked our montage as they thought it had a lot of meaning in such as short space of time and thought it was visually entertaining and different.
Because of the changes that we are making we will also be doing another photo shoot as we the artist has now changed and will need to have her on the ancillary products, magazine advert and digipak.
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